Category: Revision
I did not ever use the free write, I just started writing my paper, the three ones I used were the bases for my body paragraphs.
Link to paper: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hsj3ZnbeWyJ3F9_scH-REyg6YZwkgGQBdyniZf7R_cY/edit
Looking at my papers from the last time to now I really wanted to focus on fixing my comma splice issues. Last paper I had a lot of run on sentences and this time around I looked deeper into my paper to make sure that I separated my sentences better with commas. As well I tried to focus on making sure each sentence had a complete thought to it instead of having fragmented sentences. Another thing that I worked on was integrating my quotes better and properly citing using MLA format.
Overall I hated doing this, It was a nice time to just relax and decompress but I was so stressed I think it made it worse. I did this in my house down in my basement turned all the electronics off and just sat on the couch. Although having no worry of social media was a new feeling because it has become such a big part of everyones lives.
Overall I liked the new way that I revised my paper. Instead of just looking at the basic surface level stuff like grammar or spelling I reorganized and changed the entire thing. I wouldn’t say that I am 100 percent satisfied with writing my new paper because this was the first time I have written a paper like this. Hoping that if I can keep working on it I will be a lot better on the next one.
As far as Blooms Taxonomy goes I believe that I went all the way to the creating step but never completed it. The main focus on my paper was actually analyzing the texts we read and how they connected back to me. Besides that I was also evaluating the two pieces of information on what opinion I most related to and actually applied to real world scenarios. Although I did not have these two key steps in my paper until the final draft, my base writing was strictly applying, understanding, and remembering.
While doing this I really only did some organizational pieces and basic surface level revision. For some reason editing this paper was very difficult for me to do, looking back onto it there are defiantly more things that I need to work on. Also, I’ll be focused on finding some new techniques to help me sit down and edit all of my papers a lot better.
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