Hi Caleb,
As you develop your draft, consider taking a stronger stance. Is this data collection more positive or negative? As we have discussed, you like to revisit your main argument further into the drafting the process, which is fine as long as you make sure that your stance is stronger by final draft. Also, work toward narrowing the topic. What type of data collection will be your focus — used for marketing or product development? Internet of Things data (Smart devices)? Social media data? Also, what format do you think you will use for your final project (essay, podcast, or video)? Good start!
I will definitely make a stronger thesis by the end of my paper. As far as my stance, I am going to take more or an approach towards marketing as I feel that is more prevalent in today’s world. I am going to be doing an essay for this project as it fits more towards my strengths as I am not fully comfortable with the process making a podcast or video.
Hi Caleb,
As you develop your draft, consider taking a stronger stance. Is this data collection more positive or negative? As we have discussed, you like to revisit your main argument further into the drafting the process, which is fine as long as you make sure that your stance is stronger by final draft. Also, work toward narrowing the topic. What type of data collection will be your focus — used for marketing or product development? Internet of Things data (Smart devices)? Social media data? Also, what format do you think you will use for your final project (essay, podcast, or video)? Good start!
I will definitely make a stronger thesis by the end of my paper. As far as my stance, I am going to take more or an approach towards marketing as I feel that is more prevalent in today’s world. I am going to be doing an essay for this project as it fits more towards my strengths as I am not fully comfortable with the process making a podcast or video.