Looking at my papers from the last time to now I really wanted to focus on fixing my comma splice issues. Last paper I had a lot of run on sentences and this time around I looked deeper into my paper to make sure that I separated my sentences better with commas. As well I tried to focus on making sure each sentence had a complete thought to it instead of having fragmented sentences. Another thing that I worked on was integrating my quotes better and properly citing using MLA format.